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 **AxaMonitor** reached out to the writer who launched a daily blog critiquing the //Axanar// script recently [[script_release|leaked]] by former chief technologist Terry McIntosh. **AxaMonitor** reached out to the writer who launched a daily blog critiquing the //Axanar// script recently [[script_release|leaked]] by former chief technologist Terry McIntosh.
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 +<wrap lo>//See also: [[locked_script|The 'Locked' Axanar Screenplay: A Review]]//</wrap>
  
 The site, [[https://axanarsporking.wordpress.com|Axanar: The Sporkings]], walks through the screenplay daily, roughly a scene at a time, commenting on the script producer [[Alec Peters]] called "fully revised and locked" just before he was [[lawsuit|sued]] by Star Trek's owners for [[copyright_infringement]]. The site, [[https://axanarsporking.wordpress.com|Axanar: The Sporkings]], walks through the screenplay daily, roughly a scene at a time, commenting on the script producer [[Alec Peters]] called "fully revised and locked" just before he was [[lawsuit|sued]] by Star Trek's owners for [[copyright_infringement]].
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-The most glaring, Stark writes, is Peters' making the role Garth of Izar, , who can do no wrong portrayed by Peters, a "Mary Sue" — a perfect character, vociferously and voluminously admired by all the other characters.+The most glaring, Stark writes, is Peters' making the role Garth of Izar, who can do no wrong as portrayed by Peters, a "Mary Sue" — a perfect character, vociferously and voluminously admired by all the other characters.
  
 Stark consented to answer some questions about her blog project, and what she's learned from reading the leaked script that was reportedly only 30 days away from filming when the lawsuit shut down production. Stark consented to answer some questions about her blog project, and what she's learned from reading the leaked script that was reportedly only 30 days away from filming when the lawsuit shut down production.
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 ==== 'Axanar' Lite ==== ==== 'Axanar' Lite ====
  
-**AxaMonitor**: How good are the prospects for Axanar Lite™ as a shortened version of this story in the faux documentary format of Prelude to Axanar? ((The lawsuit settlement allows Peters to make two 15-minute episodes comprising the //Axanar// story; he must do so without any public crowdfunding.)) \\+**AxaMonitor**: How good are the prospects for [[Axanar Lite]]™ as a shortened version of this story in the faux documentary format of Prelude to Axanar? ((The lawsuit settlement allows Peters to make two 15-minute episodes comprising the //Axanar// story; he must do so without any public crowdfunding.)) \\
 **Stark**: One of the consistent weaknesses in //Axanar// is that the script favors telling over showing.  The faux documentary format of //Prelude// will turn that weakness into a strength.  Additionally, I don't see any challenge in fitting the Axanar story into thirty minutes.  The [version] 7.3 script is inflated by constant repetition, frequently we get the same information from both the Starfleet and Klingon perspectives. **Stark**: One of the consistent weaknesses in //Axanar// is that the script favors telling over showing.  The faux documentary format of //Prelude// will turn that weakness into a strength.  Additionally, I don't see any challenge in fitting the Axanar story into thirty minutes.  The [version] 7.3 script is inflated by constant repetition, frequently we get the same information from both the Starfleet and Klingon perspectives.
  
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-<wrap lo>**DOWNLOAD** the [[face>download/preview/1862772583974620|Axanar script]] Alec Peters described in August 2015 as "fully revised and locked."</wrap>+<wrap lo>**DOWNLOAD** the [[face>download/preview/1862772583974620|Axanar script]] Alec Peters described in August 2015 as "fully revised and locked." (You may need to be logged for this link in the Files section of the [[face>groups/AxaMonitor|AxaMonitor Facebook]] page to work properly.)</wrap>
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