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 [{{::kharn-headshot.jpg |**LESS GARTH** Revisions in 2015's "final" //Axanar// script portrayed Klingon commander Kharn (Richard Hatch) as the character driving the story forward.}}] [{{::kharn-headshot.jpg |**LESS GARTH** Revisions in 2015's "final" //Axanar// script portrayed Klingon commander Kharn (Richard Hatch) as the character driving the story forward.}}]
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 +<wrap lo>//See also: [[axanar_sporking|Meet the Daily Blogger Critiquing Leaked 'Axanar' Script]]//</wrap>
  
 A heavy revision of the 2014 script by Peters and former director Christian Gossett, this newer version by Peters and film writer/commercial video producer [[imdb>name/nm7469629/|Bill Hunt]] addresses the earlier script’s problems of hollow characters, uninspired dialogue, and weak plotting by pulling focus away from [[mema>Garth of Izar]], giving more lines and scenes to other characters, and creating the only real emotional conflict in the story between the antagonist, the Klingon Kharn the Undying, and his lieutenant, Chang. A heavy revision of the 2014 script by Peters and former director Christian Gossett, this newer version by Peters and film writer/commercial video producer [[imdb>name/nm7469629/|Bill Hunt]] addresses the earlier script’s problems of hollow characters, uninspired dialogue, and weak plotting by pulling focus away from [[mema>Garth of Izar]], giving more lines and scenes to other characters, and creating the only real emotional conflict in the story between the antagonist, the Klingon Kharn the Undying, and his lieutenant, Chang.