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axanar_sporking [2017/07/08 14:33] – ['Very Happy' Critiquing 'Axanar'] ADJUSTED HEADING Carlos Pedraza | axanar_sporking [2018/03/05 22:53] – adds link to Jody's review Carlos Pedraza | ||
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- | **AxaMonitor** reached out to the writer who launched a daily blog critiquing the //Axanar// script recently leaked by former chief technologist Terry McIntosh. | + | **AxaMonitor** reached out to the writer who launched a daily blog critiquing the //Axanar// script recently |
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+ | The writer, who goes by the pseudonym Kate Stark on Facebook, takes aim at fundamental weaknesses in the script by Peters and screenwriter [[hunt_peters|Bill Hunt]], himself a critic of Peters' | ||
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- | The writer, who goes by the pseudonym Kate Stark on Facebook, takes aim at fundamental weaknesses in the script by Peters and screenwriter [[hunt_peters|Bill Hunt]], himself a critic of Peters' | ||
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- | The most glaring, Stark writes, is Peters' | + | The most glaring, Stark writes, is Peters' |
Stark consented to answer some questions about her blog project, and what she's learned from reading the leaked script that was reportedly only 30 days away from filming when the lawsuit shut down production. | Stark consented to answer some questions about her blog project, and what she's learned from reading the leaked script that was reportedly only 30 days away from filming when the lawsuit shut down production. | ||
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+ | ===== Critique Experience ===== | ||
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+ | **AxaMonitor**: | ||
+ | **Kate Stark**: There were a lot of reasons I got started with fan fiction. First, I was reading a lot of fan fiction. It was how we engaged with franchises we loved, particularly while waiting for the next installment. \\ \\ | ||
+ | Second, there were existing communities. I was able to find people from whom I could learn and with whom I could share. | ||
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- | ===== Critique Experience ===== | ||
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- | **Kate Stark**: There were a lot of reasons I got started with fan fiction. First, I was reading a lot of fan fiction. It was how we engaged with franchises we loved, particularly while waiting for the next installment. \\ \\ | ||
- | Second, there were existing communities. I was able to find people from whom I could learn and with whom I could share. | ||
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During the heyday of fan fiction critiques, you got a massive amount of drama. | During the heyday of fan fiction critiques, you got a massive amount of drama. | ||
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+ | //**__« What surprised me about the script is that I think it would have been a fun fan film had it been produced. »__**// //<wrap indent> | ||
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==== 'Very Happy' Critiquing ' | ==== 'Very Happy' Critiquing ' | ||
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- | **Stark**: What surprised me about the script is that I think it would have been fun fan film had it been produced. | + | **Stark**: What surprised me about the script is that I think it would have been a fun fan film had it been produced. |
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**Stark**: One of the consistent weaknesses in //Axanar// is that the script favors telling over showing. | **Stark**: One of the consistent weaknesses in //Axanar// is that the script favors telling over showing. | ||
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=== Kharn the Undying === | === Kharn the Undying === | ||
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**Stark**: Chang shares almost all of Kharn' | **Stark**: Chang shares almost all of Kharn' | ||
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**Stark**: I was not a donor. | **Stark**: I was not a donor. | ||
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===== Identity ===== | ===== Identity ===== | ||
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**Stark**: I have a deeply uncomfortable relationship with the Internet. | **Stark**: I have a deeply uncomfortable relationship with the Internet. | ||
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==== TampAxanar? ==== | ==== TampAxanar? ==== | ||
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- | **Stark**: I'm not that clever. | + | **Stark**: I'm not that clever. |
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