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**AxaMonitor** reached out to the writer who launched a daily blog critiquing the //Axanar// script recently [[script_release|leaked]] by former chief technologist Terry McIntosh. | **AxaMonitor** reached out to the writer who launched a daily blog critiquing the //Axanar// script recently [[script_release|leaked]] by former chief technologist Terry McIntosh. | ||
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The site, [[https:// | The site, [[https:// | ||
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===== Mary Sue ===== | ===== Mary Sue ===== | ||
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Stark consented to answer some questions about her blog project, and what she's learned from reading the leaked script that was reportedly only 30 days away from filming when the lawsuit shut down production. | Stark consented to answer some questions about her blog project, and what she's learned from reading the leaked script that was reportedly only 30 days away from filming when the lawsuit shut down production. | ||
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**Stark**: One of the consistent weaknesses in //Axanar// is that the script favors telling over showing. | **Stark**: One of the consistent weaknesses in //Axanar// is that the script favors telling over showing. | ||
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=== Kharn the Undying === | === Kharn the Undying === |