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axanar_sporking [2017/07/08 15:10] – ['Axanar' Lite] adds script photo Carlos Pedrazaaxanar_sporking [2018/03/05 22:53] – adds link to Jody's review Carlos Pedraza
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 **AxaMonitor** reached out to the writer who launched a daily blog critiquing the //Axanar// script recently [[script_release|leaked]] by former chief technologist Terry McIntosh. **AxaMonitor** reached out to the writer who launched a daily blog critiquing the //Axanar// script recently [[script_release|leaked]] by former chief technologist Terry McIntosh.
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 +<wrap lo>//See also: [[locked_script|The 'Locked' Axanar Screenplay: A Review]]//</wrap>
  
 The site, [[https://axanarsporking.wordpress.com|Axanar: The Sporkings]], walks through the screenplay daily, roughly a scene at a time, commenting on the script producer [[Alec Peters]] called "fully revised and locked" just before he was [[lawsuit|sued]] by Star Trek's owners for [[copyright_infringement]]. The site, [[https://axanarsporking.wordpress.com|Axanar: The Sporkings]], walks through the screenplay daily, roughly a scene at a time, commenting on the script producer [[Alec Peters]] called "fully revised and locked" just before he was [[lawsuit|sued]] by Star Trek's owners for [[copyright_infringement]].
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-The most glaring, Stark writes, is Peters' making the role Garth of Izar, , who can do no wrong portrayed by Peters, a "Mary Sue" — a perfect character, vociferously and voluminously admired by all the other characters.+The most glaring, Stark writes, is Peters' making the role Garth of Izar, who can do no wrong as portrayed by Peters, a "Mary Sue" — a perfect character, vociferously and voluminously admired by all the other characters.
  
 Stark consented to answer some questions about her blog project, and what she's learned from reading the leaked script that was reportedly only 30 days away from filming when the lawsuit shut down production. Stark consented to answer some questions about her blog project, and what she's learned from reading the leaked script that was reportedly only 30 days away from filming when the lawsuit shut down production.
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-<wrap lo>**DOWNLOAD** the [[face>download/preview/1862772583974620|Axanar script]] Alec Peters described in August 2015 as "fully revised and locked."</wrap>+<wrap lo>**DOWNLOAD** the [[face>download/preview/1862772583974620|Axanar script]] Alec Peters described in August 2015 as "fully revised and locked." (You may need to be logged for this link in the Files section of the [[face>groups/AxaMonitor|AxaMonitor Facebook]] page to work properly.)</wrap>
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